Sunday, November 13, 2011

Hawthorne Excerpt Selection and Explication

After you have read Hawthorne's biography and commented 2-3 interesting details about his life, please spend some time browsing the following excerpts. You will need to select one of these excerpts and do a close reading (read-paraphrase-identify SOAPSTone). Please read these instructions carefully ALL THE WAY THROUGH BEFORE BEGINNING so you know what to do.
  1. Select an excerpt.
  2. Open up a word document or a Google doc and copy and paste the excerpt into that document.
  3. Read the excerpt and then type your paraphrase in that same document. Remember that your paraphrase should be like a translation of the excerpt into your own words (also, not every line or word needs to be paraphrased if it is already clear).
  4. Identify the excerpt's SOAPSTone.
  5. Copy your paraphrase and SOAPSTone and paste it into a comment for this post. Remember to include your name in your post, and please also tell me the name of the excerpt you chose to explicate.
Here are the excerpts from which you can choose:

The Beginning of "Young Goodman Brown"
Young Goodman Brown came forth at sunset into the street at Salem village; but put his head back, after crossing the threshold, to exchange a parting kiss with his young wife. And Faith, as the wife was aptly named, thrust her own pretty head into the street, letting the wind play with the pink ribbons of her cap while she called to Goodman Brown.

"Dearest heart," whispered she, softly and rather sadly, when her lips were close to his ear, "prithee put off your journey until sunrise and sleep in your own bed to-night. A lone woman is troubled with such dreams and such thoughts that she's afeard of herself sometimes. Pray tarry with me this night, dear husband, of all nights in the year."

"My love and my Faith," replied young Goodman Brown, "of all nights in the year, this one night must I tarry away from thee. My journey, as thou callest it, forth and back again, must needs be done 'twixt now and sunrise. What, my sweet, pretty wife, dost thou doubt me already, and we but three months married?"

"Then God bless you!" said Faith, with the pink ribbons; "and may you find all well whn you come back."

"Amen!" cried Goodman Brown. "Say thy prayers, dear Faith, and go to bed at dusk, and no harm will come to thee."

So they parted; and the young man pursued his way until, being about to turn the corner by the meeting-house, he looked back and saw the head of Faith still peeping after him with a melancholy air, in spite of her pink ribbons.

"Poor little Faith!" thought he, for his heart smote him. "What a wretch am I to leave her on such an errand! She talks of dreams, too. Methought as she spoke there was trouble in her face, as if a dream had warned her what work is to be done tonight. But no, no; 't would kill her to think it. Well, she's a blessed angel on earth; and after this one night I'll cling to her skirts and follow her to heaven."


The Beginning of "The Artist of the Beautiful"
An elderly man, with his pretty daughter on his arm, was passing along the street, and emerged from the gloom of the cloudy evening into the light that fell across the pavement from the window of a small shop. It was a projecting window; and on the inside were suspended a variety of watches, pinchbeck, silver, and one or two of gold, all with their faces turned from the streets, as if churlishly disinclined to inform the wayfarers what o'clock it was. Seated within the shop, sidelong to the window with his pale face bent earnestly over some delicate piece of mechanism on which was thrown the concentrated lustre of a shade lamp, appeared a young man.

"What can Owen Warland be about?" muttered old Peter Hovenden, himself a retired watchmaker, and the former master of this same young man whose occupation he was now wondering at. "What can the fellow be about? These six months past I have never come by his shop without seeing him just as steadily at work as now. It would be a flight beyond his usual foolery to seek for the perpetual motion; and yet I know enough of my old business to be certain that what he is now so busy with is no part of the machinery of a watch."

"Perhaps, father," said Annie, without showing much interest in the question, "Owen is inventing a new kind of timekeeper. I am sure he has ingenuity enough."


"Poh, child! He has not the sort of ingenuity to invent anything better than a Dutch toy," answered her father, who had formerly been put to much vexation by Owen Warland's irregular genius. "A plague on such ingenuity! All the effect that ever I knew of it was to spoil the accuracy of some of the best watches in my shop. He would turn the sun out of its orbit and derange the whole course of time, if, as I said before, his ingenuity could grasp anything bigger than a child's toy!"

From the Middle of "The Minister's Black Veil"
The cause of so much amazement may appear sufficiently slight. Mr. Hooper, a gentlemanly person, of about thirty, though still a bachelor, was dressed with due clerical neatness, as if a careful wife had starched his band, and brushed the weekly dust from his Sunday's garb. There was but one thing remarkable in his appearance. Swathed about his forehead, and hanging down over his face, so low as to be shaken by his breath, Mr. Hooper had on a black veil. On a nearer view it seemed to consist of two folds of crape, which entirely concealed his features, except the mouth and chin, but probably did not intercept his sight, further than to give a darkened aspect to all living and inanimate things. With this gloomy shade before him, good Mr. Hooper walked onward, at a slow and quiet pace, stooping somewhat, and looking on the ground, as is customary with abstracted men, yet nodding kindly to those of his parishioners who still waited on the meeting-house steps. But so wonder-struck were they that his greeting hardly met with a return.

"I can't really feel as if good Mr. Hooper's face was behind that piece of crape," said the sexton.

"I don't like it," muttered an old woman, as she hobbled into the meeting-house. "He has changed himself into something awful, only by hiding his face."

"Our parson has gone mad!" cried Goodman Gray, following him across the threshold.

A rumor of some unaccountable phenomenon had preceded Mr. Hooper into the meeting-house, and set all the congregation astir. Few could refrain from twisting their heads towards the door; many stood upright, and turned directly about; while several little boys clambered upon the seats, and came down again with a terrible racket. There was a general bustle, a rustling of the women's gowns and shuffling of the men's feet, greatly at variance with that hushed repose which should attend the entrance of the minister. But Mr. Hooper appeared not to notice the perturbation of his people. He entered with an almost noiseless step, bent his head mildly to the pews on each side, and bowed as he passed his oldest parishioner, a white-haired great grandsire, who occupied an arm-chair in the centre of the aisle. It was strange to observe how slowly this venerable man became conscious of something singular in the appearance of his pastor. He seemed not fully to partake of the prevailing wonder, till Mr. Hooper had ascended the stairs, and showed himself in the pulpit, face to face with his congregation, except for the black veil. That mysterious emblem was never once withdrawn. It shook with his measured breath, as he gave out the psalm; it threw its obscurity between him and the holy page, as he read the Scriptures; and while he prayed, the veil lay heavily on his uplifted countenance. Did he seek to hide it from the dread Being whom he was addressing?

34 comments:

  1. Example comment:
    Name: Mrs. Sampson
    Excerpt: "Footprints on the Seashore"
    Paraphrase:
    It could only be a spirit that is very different than mine that could keep itself healthy and energetic without being in the sunshine or while being a lone. Very often I am tempted to visit the ocean and the woods. The roar of the ocean's waves and the sound of leaves blowing makes me feel tempted to visit these landscapes. The problem is that I have to travel pretty far to get to a forest worth my time--I don't want to stand beneath any old tree. I want to be far from the sky and I want to be surrounded by the dark foliage of a mysterious forest. Unfortunately, I am only surrounded by farms or small forest that won't satisfy my need. When my yearning for absolute solitude becomes unbearable, I tend to go to the ocean because it is easier for me to get to. I love to see the seashore which extends across the sand and rocks. One September morning, I made a promise to myself to not speak to any person. I wanted to only sit in silence on the shore and in the forest. I wanted me soul to only communicate with the feelings I got from the ocean and forest. These landscapes are surely enough to fill my soul with happiness and peace for a single day. Goodbye for now, busy world! I'll see you when the night comes and I am walking home from the sea. Until then, free me from your buys ties!

    SOAPSTone:
    Subject: being alone in nature
    Occasion: Gothicism; written by an American Gothic writer who was interested in nature
    Audience: other people who were intrigued by the mysteries of nature.
    Purpose: to describe the mysteries and beauty of nature while also showing another way to experience spirituality in nature.
    Speaker: Nathaniel Hawthorne, a Gothic writer who was interested in the dark mysteries of nature.
    Tone: calm, peaceful, but also somewhat dark and enchanting.

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  2. Olivia Storey
    “The Artist Of The Beautiful”
    A retired watchmaker was taking a walk with his daughter one night, when suddenly a tiny shop appeared ahead of them. Inside the shop was an array of different watches. A younger man sat inside the shop leaning over all the watches. The man and his daughter entered the store.

    “What does Owen Warland need now?” the retired watchmaker asked the young man in the shop with him. “What does he need? These past few months every time I pass his shop, he is working on something new. And I know enough to know he isn’t working on watches.”

    “Maybe he’s working on a new prototype.” the watchmaker’s daughter said to him.

    “Don’t be dumb,” he said to his daughter. “he has no sense of imagination or ingenuity to do that. He couldn’t even invent a Dutch toy!”


    S- Hawthorne
    O- Gothicism, written by an American Gothic author
    A- Other people who judged someone based off something suspicious they did
    P- To show how judgemental people can be when they barely know someone
    S- Being mean and rude toward someone
    T- Hurtful, judgemental

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  3. Katie Fruendt--
    -An old man was walking with his daughter along the street when the passed a shop that was selling beautiful watches. It seems to be peculiar as the watches were turned around with the faces of the clocks facing away from the widow.

    -An old man that works at the shop asks about another man that supposedly works there as well. He explains what he thinks that the other man is doing.

    -His daughter mentions something to him about what the other man could be doing, although she has no real interest.

    -The old man basically ignores/disagrees with what his daughter said, and explains that the person named Warland has never come up with a fantastic invention. He says that Warland has invented things that don’t really seem to matter, or at least in his opinion.

    SOAPSTone
    S: A man and his daughter stop by a watch shop and have a discussion about a man named Owen Warland who supposedly makes the watches.
    O: During the American Gothicism period.
    A: Towards himself, and people that were interested in American Gothicism.
    P: To write a short story about a watchmaker during the American Gothicism period.
    S: Nathaniel Hawthorne.
    Tone: Depressing, sarcasm, judging, rude

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  4. Marlee Kuhtz
    “The Artist of the Beautiful”
    An old man and his daughter went for an evening walk when is was cloudy, and so the light of a small shop fell upon them. Inside the shop, were many different watches, and they were turned towards the streets outside so that the people passing by could see the time. Also inside, sitting, was a young man with a pale face, looking at a specific piece of mechanism.

    The old man, Peter Hovenden, is confused as to why the young man, Owen Warland, is always working hard on that piece of mechanism.

    Then Peter’s daughter explains that the young man might be inventing a new way to tell time, and she believes he seems to be clever enough to do it.

    But Peter does not believe in this. He says, “He has not the sort of ingenuity to invent anything better than a Dutch Toy,” When Peter worked with Owen, he often got annoyed by Owen’s cleverness. But Peter continues to speak about how the young man is not clever or smart enough to invent a new time teller and if he did invent something, it would take the amount of cleverness it takes to create a child's toy.

    -SOAPSTone
    Subject: negativity and not believing in someone
    Occasion: American Gothic Lit. time period
    Audience: People who don’t believe in others
    Purpose: To inform people that you can be negatively judgmental towards someone that you hardly know
    Speaker: Nathaniel Hawthorne
    Tone: Negative, judgmental

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  5. Name: Jordyn Summerfield
    The Beginning of "Young Goodman Brown"
    Young Goodman Brown came back to his wife, Faith, to kiss give her a kiss right before sunset in the town of Salem. Faith poked her head out of the door to look for him and is wearing pink ribbons that blow in the wind.
    Faith asks Brown, in a whispering tone, to stay home tonight and sleep in his own bed and be safe. She says she is sad and scared when she sleep alone at night.
    Brown replies to Faith saying that he wishes to stay home tonight but tonight is the most important night of his journey and must go. He says that they are three months married and she must trust him with this. Faith gives him her consent and says that when he returns it will be all well.
    Faith and Brown parted and Brown looked back at the house to see his wife standing in the doorway with her pink ribbons in the wind.
    Brown feels bad for leaving Faith and calls himself a wretch for leaving her in a bad place. Faith wants him to dream, but she felt uneven talking about dreaming for she might have had a feeling whatever was happening tonight was not good. But if that were true she wouldn’t have been so calm. Faith is an angel and I hope to see her in heaven.

    -SOAPSTone
    Subject: The Salem Witch Trials
    Occasion: During the Gothic Period when people enjoyed reading fearful pieces of writing
    Audience: People during the Gothic Period who wanted to read about Salem Witch Trials
    Purpose: To describe what it was like for people involved in the Salem Witch Trials
    Speaker: Nathaniel Hawthorne
    Tone: sad, hopeless

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  6. Jory Vance
    The Beginning of "The Artist of the Beautiful"
    An elderly man, with his pretty daughter on his arm, was passing along the street, and emerged from the gloom of the cloudy evening into the light that fell across the pavement from the window of a small shop. It was a projecting window; and on the inside were suspended a variety of watches, pinchbeck, silver, and one or two of gold, all with their faces turned from the streets, as if churlishly disinclined to inform the wayfarers what o'clock it was. Seated within the shop, sidelong to the window with his pale face bent earnestly over some delicate piece of mechanism on which was thrown the concentrated lustre of a shade lamp, appeared a young man.

    "What can Owen Warland be about?" muttered old Peter Hovenden, himself a retired watchmaker, and the former master of this same young man whose occupation he was now wondering at. "What can the fellow be about? These six months past I have never come by his shop without seeing him just as steadily at work as now. It would be a flight beyond his usual foolery to seek for the perpetual motion; and yet I know enough of my old business to be certain that what he is now so busy with is no part of the machinery of a watch."

    "Perhaps, father," said Annie, without showing much interest in the question, "Owen is inventing a new kind of timekeeper. I am sure he has ingenuity enough."

    "Poh, child! He has not the sort of ingenuity to invent anything better than a Dutch toy," answered her father, who had formerly been put to much vexation by Owen Warland's irregular genius. "A plague on such ingenuity! All the effect that ever I knew of it was to spoil the accuracy of some of the best watches in my shop. He would turn the sun out of its orbit and derange the whole course of time, if, as I said before, his ingenuity could grasp anything bigger than a child's toy!"
    An elderly man and his daughter were looking into the window of a small shop, and there was a man seated working on a type of mechanism. Peter Hovenden muttered that he has been working on the mechanism for 6 months, and is not a watch. Annie says Owen is inventing a new timekeeper, but her father said he has and irregular genius that does not conform to what he is suppose to do with watches.
    S-Owen Warland
    O- The duration of the puritans
    A-People who follow a huge group or religion
    P- to inform people its okay to go your own way
    S- a narrator
    Tone-Directed

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  7. Name: Tyler Madden
    Excerpt: Young Goodman Brown

    My paraphrase:

    Young Goodman Brown came to his house in Salem at sunset.
    He was just about to leave for an errand and kissed his wife before he went.
    His wife, named Faith, tried to convince Young Goodman Brown to stay tonight, and that she will get bad dreams if she sleeps alone tonight.
    But, Young Goodman Brown could not miss this night out of all the nights of the year. This was the most important to go to. Then he accuses his wife of doubting him, although they are three months into their marriage.
    Then, his wife gives up on trying to convince him to stay, so she wishes him well and hopes that all is well when he returns. Young Goodman Brown tells Faith to go to bed at dusk, make sure to pray, and all will be well for her.
    Then, he leaves. When he is about to arrive at the meeting house, he looks back and still sees Faith watching him from the doorway.
    Then Young Goodman Brown feels bad for leaving Faith for the night, because she was talking about dreams. He promises to himself that when he gets back, that he’ll stay with her for the rest of their lives, and when they die and go to heaven.

    Soapstone:

    S- Guy leaving his wife for the night
    O- A sunset in Salem village
    A- People who read Gothic writing during that time period
    P- To entertain
    S- Nathaniel Hawthorne
    Tone- Worried, Mysterious

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  8. Sam Kodzik

    Young Goodman Brown Paraphrase:
    Brown went into the street proudly after kissing his wife. And Faith, his wife, ran after him into the street.

    She whispers to him that she wants him to stay at home just for the night. She doesn't want to worry about him, so she just wants him to stay for this night.

    He tells her that it is important for him to be gone on this night of all of them. He must be gone for the night and back by sunrise, and he asks if she doubts him.

    She lets him leave in good faith and bids him safe return

    He blesses her and tells her that if she prays she will be safe.

    He began to walk away, and when he looked back Faith was still there looking after him.

    He becomes angry at himself for leaving her, just to do his odd chore. He is even suspicious that she was warned of his plans for tonight. But that impossible, and after tonight I will not leave her again.

    S: A man who is leaving his wife to do an odd chore for one night
    O: American Gothic movement
    A: People during the Gothic
    movement
    P: To entertain people with a mysterious story
    S: Nathaniel Hawthorne
    Tone: Mysterious and worried

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  9. Tori Yentz
    The Beginning of "The Artist of the Beautiful"
    An elderly man, with his pretty daughter on his arm, was passing along the street, and emerged from the gloom of the cloudy evening into the light that fell across the pavement from the window of a small shop. It was a projecting window; and on the inside were suspended a variety of watches, pinchbeck, silver, and one or two of gold, all with their faces turned from the streets, as if churlishly disinclined to inform the wayfarers what o'clock it was. Seated within the shop, sidelong to the window with his pale face bent earnestly over some delicate piece of mechanism on which was thrown the concentrated lustre of a shade lamp, appeared a young man.

    "What can Owen Warland be about?" muttered old Peter Hovenden, himself a retired watchmaker, and the former master of this same young man whose occupation he was now wondering at. "What can the fellow be about? These six months past I have never come by his shop without seeing him just as steadily at work as now. It would be a flight beyond his usual foolery to seek for the perpetual motion; and yet I know enough of my old business to be certain that what he is now so busy with is no part of the machinery of a watch."

    "Perhaps, father," said Annie, without showing much interest in the question, "Owen is inventing a new kind of timekeeper. I am sure he has ingenuity enough."

    "Poh, child! He has not the sort of ingenuity to invent anything better than a Dutch toy," answered her father, who had formerly been put to much vexation by Owen Warland's irregular genius. "A plague on such ingenuity! All the effect that ever I knew of it was to spoil the accuracy of some of the best watches in my shop. He would turn the sun out of its orbit and derange the whole course of time, if, as I said before, his ingenuity could grasp anything bigger than a child's toy!"






    An old man with his daughter was walking down the street on a cloudy, gloomy night, when they came across a little shop.









    In the shop there were watches, pinchbeck, silver and gold, all facing the street.











    In the shop there was a young man looking at a delicate piece of mechanism.















    The old retired watchmaker is talking about another owner of a shop. He is complaining about how the other owners business is doing better than his and he does not know why.































    His daughter says maybe he invented something new and that’s why it’s more busy.










    The old man says that the other owner could never invent anything better than a Dutch toy.

    Subject: A watchmaker in a shop.
    Occasion: In a shop on a gloomy day.
    Audience: Fiction readers.
    Purpose: To entertain and tell a story about a watchmaker.
    Speaker: Nathaniel Hawthorne.
    Tone: Dark, gloomy, mysterious.

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  10. Erin Kleber- the artist of the beautiful
    An old man was taking a walk with his young daughter on a gloomy night, when they came across a shop. Inside were a multitude of watches faces the street, as if to tell those who passed by what time it was. In the window, you could also see a young man, heavily concentrating on a mechanism of some sort.
    The old man, who had once made watches himself, wondered what the young man could possibly be doing. He also used to be the young man’s mentor/master. The old man says that, in the past six months, he has never seen the young man actually wok until now. He knows the young man well enough to know that the focus he has now will not last.
    The girl, Annie, shows some faith in the boy and says that for all they know he could be inventing a new way to keep time. She also says that he is surely clever enough, whether or not he’s working
    The old man does not believe this, saying that the young man could barely make a Dutch child’s toy with all the creativity he has. He also says that, during his time working with the young man, he was always annoyed with the man for messing things up, especially those he had worked very hard on. The young man, if he tried to do anything complicated, would put the entire universe out of order.

    SOAPSTone:
    S- confidence/faith in others
    O- Gothicism
    A- those who struggle with believing in others
    P- to show that sometimes people doubt others based on their personal experience
    S- Hawthorne
    T- negative/ doubtful

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  11. The Beginning of "The Artist of the Beautiful" Braden Wallenkamp

    Paraphrase: An old man and his daughter, walking down the street. Looking in the window of a small store, they see watches, of different types. Through all the chaos in the store comes a young man into view.

    Paraphrase: The old man doesn't think the young man is doing good work because he always sees him and he never seems to be doing hard work. There is no watch parts present.

    Paraphrase: Annie sounds like she has a lot of faith in the boy.

    Paraphrase: The old man doesn't think the boy can build anything worth while. The father is probably jealous because the boy may have some new idea of how to do something.
    Subject: Confidence and trust in others
    Occasion: the American Gothicism
    Audience: Those who don't trust others abilities.
    Purpose: To get people to see the importance of having faith in others.
    Speaker: Nathaniel Hawthorne
    Tone: Dark, Not trusting

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  12. Young Good man
    Name: Toni
    Paraphrase:
    At sunset Goodman Brown came forth at sunset into the street in Salem where he kissed his young wife.




    She whispered to him that he should sleep alone until the next morning. She fears herself sometime.



    He’s faithful and dedicated to their marriage. For better or for worse. He feels that she is doubting their marriage.


    When he returns back to her that he may find her waiting faithfully.
    No harm will come to her if she says her prayers before she sleeps.
    They walked in opposite directions and when he turned around to look at her she was still looking at him.
    He doesn’t want to leave her. He could see the pain in her face as if she knew what was going to happen before it did. He doesn’t want to believe that she is a witch. He sees no bad in her and still sees her as angel.
    S: Salem Witch Trials
    O: During the Gothic Period
    A: People during this period who wanted to read about the Salem Witch Trials.
    P: To describe how it feels to the spouse of someone who is accused of being a witch
    Tone: Sad, loving, hopeless

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  13. Sarah Dempsey
    Story: "The Artist of the Beautiful"

    Paraphrase:
    The father, an old, retired watchmaker named Peter Hovenden, asks his daughter what Owen Warland is about. Peter the father was Owen’s master. Peter says Owen has been in the shop working every time he looks. He realizes that what he is working on at the moment, is not a watch.

    Annie, the daughter, suggests to her father that Owen is inventing a new type of timepiece.

    Peter tells Annie that Owen isn't intelligent enough to invent anything.

    SOAPSTone--
    S-Owen Warland and his watchmaking
    O-During the Gothicism period in America
    A- Readers of Nathaniel Hawthorne’s work, and other gothic people.
    P- To entertain people with a gothic story about watchmakers inventions.
    S- A narrator, most likely Nathaniel Hawthorne telling the story.
    Tone- dark, mysterious, very questioning.

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  14. Claudia Deflieze
    The beginning of "Yong Goodman Brown"

    A man named Young Goodman Brown went to the street in Salem at sunset
    He gave his wife a goodbye kiss
    His wife’s name was Faith , and she returned the kiss
    The pink ribbons in her hair flowed when she called for Goodman Brown

    The wife whispers to her husband before he leaves, saying how she is troubled. She wants him to pray for her all nights of the year





    Goodman Brown responds to his wife, saying how she doubts him already and they have only been married for three months.





    Faith responds by saying God bless you, and that everything will be well when he comes back

    Goodman Brown responds by telling Faith to say her prayers, and go to bed at nighttime and no harm will come to her.


    The husband and wife parted ways, and when Goodman Brown looked back he saw Faith looking back at him, there was sadness in the air.


    Goodman Brown is thinking about how unfair it is to Faith that he leave her. Faith talks about dreams. There was trouble in her face. That she had dreamed that she had been warned that there was going to be trouble that night. Then he thinks how she is an angel, and after this one night they will go to heaven together.
    Subject: A young couple that lives in Salem, and are very sad that they won’t be together for the night.
    Occasion: Transcendentalism
    Audience: People who are idealistic, and like love stories.
    Purpose: To explain how you work through a hardship within a marriage.
    Speaker: Nathaniel Hawthorne
    Tone: Sad, Hopeful, Romantic

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  15. Sarah Jung
    “Young Goodman Brown”
    A man and woman share a last kiss before he leaves. She wants him to put off the journey because she doesn’t want to be left alone. But he insists that he has to go. His journey needs to be done. She wants him to go and have a safe journey but to return as soon as he can. He tells her that she has nothing to worry about being alone at night. She will be fine. Faith didn’t go inside, she waited outside and watched him as he walked away. He realizes that he does feel bad leaving her alone and he promises to return and stay by her side forever because she is the best thing that happened to him.
    S: A young couple that is sad about leaving each other for the night because they just want to be together.
    O: Transcendentalism
    A: People who have someone they deeply care about.
    P: To help people realize how much someone may mean to them
    S: Nathaniel Hawthorne
    Tone: Happy, hopeful, loving

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  16. Sam Zanowski
    Young Goodman Brown Paraphrase

    Goodman brown arrives at Salem at sunset with his wife, Faith.

    Faith wants to stay in Salem overnight and continue the journey in the morning.

    This night he must continue with his journey, and they have been married for 3 months.

    Faith is staying in Salem and Goodman Brown is going.

    Goodman Brown feels bad about leaving Faith and decides he will never leave her again until death.

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  17. Amara Green "The artist of the beautiful."
    Paraphrase: An old watchmaker and his daughter are walking around when they come across this store with all these beautiful watches when a young man appears. The old man ask what he could be doing and the daughter explains that he could be making a new watch. the old man completely disagrees and says that the boy could never make a fine watch.
    S: negative and disagreeing
    O: American gothic lit. period
    A: People who read gothic literature
    P: to tell a story about not being faithful of other people
    S; Hawthorne
    Tone: Doubtful, negative

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  18. Gabby Procopis
    The Beginning of “The Artist of the Beautiful”

    A man and his daughter are taking a walk outside because it stopped being gloomy and became nice and sunny out. They saw inside a window of a shop and saw that they were selling all different kinds of watches. And they also saw a man under a light working on fixing a watch

    S: Owen Warland watching watch making
    O: Gothicism
    A: People who enjoy gothic writing
    P: Entertain people who like writing
    S: Nathaniel Hawthorne
    T: Dark but also kind of mysterious

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  19. Olivia Storey
    “The Artist Of The Beautiful”
    A retired watchmaker was taking a walk with his daughter one night, when suddenly a tiny shop appeared ahead of them. Inside the shop was an array of different watches. A younger man sat inside the shop leaning over all the watches. The man and his daughter entered the store.

    “What does Owen Warland need now?” the retired watchmaker asked the young man in the shop with him. “What does he need? These past few months every time I pass his shop, he is working on something new. And I know enough to know he isn’t working on watches.”

    “Maybe he’s working on a new prototype.” the watchmaker’s daughter said to him.

    “Don’t be dumb!” he said to his daughter. “He has no sense of imagination or ingenuity to do that. He couldn't even invent a Dutch toy!”


    S- Hawthorne
    O- Gothicism, written by an American Gothic author
    A- Other people who judged someone based off something suspicious they did
    P- To show how judgmental people can be when they barely know someone
    S- Being mean and rude toward someone
    T- Hurtful, judgmental

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  20. Paraphrase of “Adult Life”

    In 1828, Hawthorne published his first novel, “Fanshawe”. He also published a collection of short stories called Twice-Told Tales, in 1837. He then got married to Sophia Peabody and worked at a Custom House and joined a transcendentalist community called Brook Farm. They moved to Concord, Massachusetts and then other places throughout the area. “The Scarlet Letter got published in 1850 and then his other novels began to succeed.

    Hawthorne’s writing often went around New England. It had a lot of allegories and puritan inspiration. His novels are considered part of the dark romantic movement. The themes were often about humanity and their sins with many deeper, complex messages. Many of his works were novels, biographies and short stories.

    Tom Hoffman

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  21. The artist of the beautiful
    Julia Wulff-
    An old man and his daughter were walking down the street and went into a happy shop. There was many expensive things inside. There was a young man looking at the stuff in the store.
    Hes an old watchmaker and has the same skill as other men. He is always hard at work. What he is doing now has nothing to with his watch making skills.
    He doesnt use time wisely
    He doesn't. He doesnt do anything bigger than small things in life, always takes the easy way.
    S- A man being mean to someone else
    O- American Gothic
    A- People who judge other people
    P- To show how people judge others when they dont really know them
    S- Hawthorne
    T- Judgmental, mean, rude

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  22. Pierce The Fierce Williams: What I found interesting about Nathaniel Hawthorne was the his ancestor was a judge for the Harlem Witch Trials, after we just got done with the section. Also he met Abraham Lincoln, an amazing person for what he did. Finally I found that he died doing what he loved interesting because before i die i would like to do what i love.

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  23. Gretchen Meyer- "The Artist of the Beautiful"
    A man and his daughter are taking a walk on a sunny, beautiful day when they come across a store. The man and his daughter then see a young man working on something. The father and daughter talk about what the boy could be making, the daughter thinks the young man is working on a new watch, while the father disagrees and basically says how dumb she is for saying that.
    S- Watching watch making
    O- American Gothic Lit. Period
    A- People who read Gothic Literature
    P- To show how judging someone before you know them isn’t good.
    S- Hawthorne
    Tone- Judgemental, mean

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  24. “The Artist Of The Beautiful”
    A retired watchmaker was taking a walk with his daughter one night, when suddenly a tiny shop appeared ahead of them. Inside the shop was an array of different watches. A younger man sat inside the shop leaning over all the watches. The man and his daughter entered the store.

    “What does Owen Warland need now?” the retired watchmaker asked the young man in the shop with him. “What does he need? These past few months every time I pass his shop, he is working on something new. And I know enough to know he isn’t working on watches.”

    “Maybe he’s working on a new prototype.” the watchmaker’s daughter said to him.

    “Don’t be dumb!” he said to his daughter. “He has no sense of imagination or ingenuity to do that. He couldn’t even invent a Dutch toy!”


    S- Hawthorne
    O- Gothicism, written by an American Gothic author
    A- Other people who judged someone based off something suspicious they did
    P- To show how judgemental people can be when they barely know someone
    S- Being mean and rude toward someone
    T- Hurtful, judgemental

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  25. The Beginning of Young Goodman Brown
    Josh Erdtmann
    Goodman Brown is leaving the town at sunset and is saying goodbye to his wife Faith.















    Browns wife wants him to put of his journey until the morning and sleep in his own bed tonight. A lonely womans mind wonders and can even be scared of herself. I want you to stay tonight of all the nights of the year.









    I give you my love and my faith but tonight we must be alone. My journey must happen tonight in between now and sunrise. we have only been married 3 months you aren't doubted me already are you.









    If it must happen then god bless you, and i hope you find your way back safe.




    If you say your prayers and go to bed at dusk then no harm will happen to you.





    Brown starts on his journey and continues forward ntil the corner where he turns back and sees his wife looking back at him with a gloomy face.








    My poor wife, i have left her all alone. I am worried she may have dreamed what might happen tonight and the dream warned her. She must not think that, she is a good girl that i will be with forever after i return.

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    1. S: A narrator
      O: Gothic times
      A: Gothics
      P: To tell people about the before journey of Goodman Brown
      S:Goodman Brown before his journey
      Tone: Sad but hopeful

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  26. Luci Hovel

    The Beginning of "The Artist of the Beautiful"

    A man and his daughter are walking down the street at night and look in the window of a small shop





    there are expensive pieces of jewelry turned away from the store window, so that no one walking by could see the faces of the watches






    a young pale man was working inside on something delicate








    Peter Hovenden questions what the young man’s work is like, whether its good or not, because he used to teach him



    What is it that drives this man to work, which he’s always hard at





    It would be unusual for the person he is to put so much continuous work into something, knowing the trade there is no way he could be working on the machinery of the watch













    He doesn’t have the brains/ creativity to create anything with value



    After working on watches he would mess them up, he is not smart enough to make anything more than a childs toy


    Soapstone:

    S: Father and daughter walking at night
    O: Gothic times
    A: People who wonder what drives people to put certain amounts of effort into something’s over others
    P: To make you wonder why people do what they do
    S: Narrator
    Tone: Confused, hysteric, contemplatory

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  27. Johanna Taylor- "The Artist of the Beautiful"
    A man and his daughter walked up to a store window that was brightly lighted. The store had a bunch of different expensive looking things in it and inside that store was a young man. The young man is working on something little, very busily, which is peculiar to Peter Hovenden, so he thinks he is not working on something related to his work. The old man is talking about how Owen Warland could not be making anything greater than a child's toy because he does not have the capacity of being able to such.
    S: Hawthorne
    O: American Gothic Lit. Period
    A: People who are interested in Gothic Literature
    P: To show that some people can be very rude and judge mental to someone they have no information about
    S: A man being rude to someone
    Tone: Judge mental, mean, rude

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  28. Paraphrase of "The Artist of the Beautiful"
    An old man and his daughter walk around town. They stop at a store to see that they are selling nice watches. They look and talk to the man inside trying to fix one of the wrist watches. The daughter thinks the man is making a new watch and the father questions her intelligence for thinking that.

    S: Nathaniel Hawthorne
    O: Gothicism
    A: People who are judgemental
    P: To inform people that you shouldn't judge people before getting to know them.
    S: Judgement
    T: Rude and Judgemental

    Tom Hoffman

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  29. Name: Cassidy
    Poem: Young Goodman Brown
    A husband kisses his wife goodbye before he leaves. The wife doesn't want to be alone, she wants him to stay. He insists he must go and tells her not to worry. He feels guilty for leaving her and promises to come back to her and not leave again.
    S: A man leaving his wife
    O: Salem Witch Trials
    A: People who read writings of gothicism
    P: To describe his love for Faith
    S: Nathaniel Hawthorne
    TONE: Loving

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  30. "The Beginning Of Young Goodman Brown"
    Goodman Brown came home to give his wife a goodbye kiss, and she looks out of her window to call to him

    She is asking Goodman Brown to stay with her for the night instead of leaving

    He says his journey requires him to travel through there and back through the night, and he questions her for doubting him because they have only been married for 3 months

    His wife blesses him and tells him that he shall find all well when he gets back

    Goodman tells his wife to go to bed at dusk and no harm will come to her

    He leaves and he goes on his way until he looks back and sees her looking at him with a melancholy look in spite of her pink ribbons

    He feels bad for leaving her, as though she knew that he was going to do something bad on his journey, and he says that after he does the deed and comes back that he will be good to her and stay with her to the end.

    -Jack Sullivan

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  31. Nicholas Gorr
    The beginning of Young Goodman Brown
    Goodman Brown shall be departing from his wife soon and he kisses her goodbye as he leaves she calls for him. She would rather have him travel in the morning then at night for if he did it would keep her worried at night. He then says that he must go for this is an important journey and she should have confidence in him because they have been married for three months. Then then wishes him well and hope he returns safely. He reminds her to say her prayers and they will be ok. As he leaves he looks back to see that she is still lookin back at him and does wish to travel herself but he think it would worry her and that after this they shall never depart.
    S: Hawthorne
    O: Gothic period
    A:Those who like gothic literature
    P: To show his concern and love for his wife
    S: A man departing from his wife for a journey
    T: Bittersweet/sad

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  32. Pierce Williams
    The Beginning of Young Goodman Brown


    Goodman Brown was leaving and he kissed his wife goodbye. As he was leaving she called for him.

    She hugs him and whispers in his ear to stay one more night and leave in the morning. She says she has bad dreams and need him there so shes not alone.

    Goodman says that out of all the nights this one night he has to leave her. His journey is set and he will be back soon.

    His wife says Goodbye and when he comes back he will find everything well.

    He says thank you and leaves.

    As he was walking away he was turning the corner and saw his wife looking at him.

    He feels guilty for leaving his wife.

    S: Nathaniel Hawthorne
    O: Gothic Period
    A: Men who have left their loved ones, Gothic literature lovers
    P: To show the love and concern they have for each other
    S: A man leaving his wife for his journey
    T: Loving, caring, sad

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  33. Clay Dietrich
    The Artist of the Beautiful
    An old man and his pretty daughter were walking down the street, and walked into the light coming from a small shop window. Inside, were a variety of watches, of all sorts, facing inside. In the shop, hovering over a piece of equipment, was a young man.
    The old man, named Peter, questions the young mans hard work, as he is usually found goofing off.
    The daughter, Annie, suggests that Owen may be inventing a new timekeeper.
    Peter, making fun of Annie’s statement, says that Owen wouldn’t be able to make a Dutch toy. He says that Owen will run the watch bussines into the ground and seriously doubts his skill.
    S-Nathaniel Hawthorne
    O-Most likely a time right after he retired
    A-Foolish youngsters
    P-To humiliate the youth who goof off too much
    S-A young watchmaker is being made fun of and is doubted by an older man
    Tone-Easygoing, humiliating

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